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Well today I just finished up my argument essay and I think I did fairly well on it which is good.  I've done more research on it so I can understand it better.  I think this bill is a great idea and it should be passed because it can help out alot and other states already have 16 year olds donating and nothing bad has seemed to occur from them.  If this bill gets passed I will be happy.  

In my essay I think the strongest part was my position on the bill. Although I feel that my examples were sufficient I think that maybe I should have look for different examples. Over all I am satisfies with the final draft of my essay. At first my position was in favor of the bill but as i researched and look though other opinion i realized i did not fully agree. My essay includes a personal experience and I also use Kean University and TCNJ in my essay. I found those examples good because i know people that have used the resources offered by the schools. 

Today was a great day but to bad for me i had to work all day. Now i trying my best to look over my essay before summiting it. I hate working doing the weekend because i never have time to get all my school work done, this is a perfect example of how this job is getting in the way of my school. At this point all i can do is hope that i pass all my finials coming up. however, this might be the last blog I'm getting a grade for but it wont be the last one i write....

    In my bill final draft I think it might be a little better then all my other drafts since this semester.  But I might could have did a little better working on the drafts.  Good thing writing this bill is all over.  I hope the points that I gave are understandable.  Also, I hope the reader understand where I am coming from writing in the draft.  This assignment was not to bad to do, it took almost the whole month that was good though.  In my draft I tried to give good points that students and teachers understand what I am trying to say. So, all I have to wait for are the grade for the assignment and I might will let yall know what's going on.

             Well this is my last blog i will have to do this semester.  I think this will be my last blog ever.  Today was so beautiful outside it hit 80 degrees.  In this weather i decided to wash my car because it was so dirty.  It was not that bad i think it took me like an hour.  After i came home from history class i started finishing up my argument paper im still working oon it i will make deadline  though.  I hope everyone has a safe and happy summer and try to relax if you are not taking summer classes.  Tommorow i will be going to my sisters basketball game (hope they win).  Well thats all i have to say so long vox.

I just finished up my  polished draft for the argument essay, i think i did an ok job knowing that its going to be better when i do my final draft for the portfolio. Well this is probally going to be my last blog of the year and i am happy its finaly going to be over because these blogs were getting old becuase their was really nothing else to right about i was running out of ideas an getting a little bored writing them but i guess it was a good experiance.

for what i'm doing now, is writting a "polished draft"  about my argument on a bill that is suppose to help me with to develope a sense on what issues i shouold argue about and how to go about doing it . my nexty step is that io still have to do other piece of writing that i don't really know yet but i'm sure that its going to take all the time i need . then i am to continue on working on my portfolio for my class  grade. hopefully i will show that being in this class was not a waste.

So far my argument essay is going well. I started doing research on my bill, which help me to bring my essay together. This is just the first draft I still have more research to do in order to back up my argument. The second draft will have all the needed information with added facts, details, and examples. This essay is very hard to write I have to take my time and organized my ideas, with that done I can see why my essay can’t be one of the best.

Today is a day to celebrate!!!! You must be wondering why, well let me enlighten you readers. Today is the last day of me blogging. I had to do it for my English call but now my class is almost over and I finally get to stop writing this. I know most people enjoy blogging but I don't mainly because I don't have anything to talk about.

So far in class i have used papers that were written by my classmate in order to conduct a worshop. this i swhen my group and i have all of each others papers/essays and then provide feedback. the way we give feedback is thaty we give constructive critism and write minor commments. this would help us in the long run to build up a well written paper,  that we can use for our final paper. this would also help us to receieve a better or well deserved grade.

Also in class we have read many bills that we are to make arguments for. this for those to understand where we come from as far as opinions on the topic. we don't have to try to convince people to be on our side for the argument, but we do have to at least build one. if the argument has already been made into a law then to make an argument agianst it would be useless.

now i plan to make alot of revising and editing on all the papers that i hav edone for this semester. the in the end will determine what is going to be my grade for the whol class. hopefully i will do good.