3 posts from October 2007

The other day, I had a meeting with a professor about my writing. It was interest because she help me pick out some of the weakness of my writing that I didn't realize. For instant, to improve my writing I need more help in working with s, er, ing's and spelling grammar, and how I can work on improving these weaknesses. As I write, I never look at the ending of the works to see if that need to be porous or if I add a porous to the word and needs to be taking away. Therefore, I thought going to see professor Awoods to talk about writing help me a lot.

Their was an house and a building that exlored in Irvington, N.J. last friday.That caused one man to died, but were able to find four survivors, three construction workers and a security guard .After cutting through rafters and wooden beams.The injured people was taking to University Hospital in Newark and later to St. Barnabas Medical Center in Livingston.The worker who was killed was Mario Goncalves, was a spokesman for the Essex County Prosecutor's Office. Police say it might be a break-in and may have a theory.Also it was said that their was many break-in in their neighbors the last week.http://ap.google.com/article/ALeqM5hay640dcYNdo-UkRsfU9D0yXX-JQD8SCMMM80

On September 27 I mess class because I was sick l really didn't want to miss school but I didn't want to go and wouldn't be able to sent in the class and couldn't function the way I need to. When I mess classes it make me fell as dough I’m behind then every body else and when I come back to class I fell loss because most of the time they class leave off from the last class. For example when I was reading the homework that was given for the day I wasn't their it was hard to understand one of them because I didn't know what they did in class the day I wasn't there and I don't know of any one in that class to ask. So next  time I’m in class I’m make sure I get with one of my classmates to figure out what I did wrong and so next time I was have to fell loss.